چالش دیدگاه من - درس چهارم انگلیسی قدرت

وااااای اخرش مو به تنم سیخ شد…
اگه داداشه ایرانی بود اوضاع فرق داشت:sweat_smile:
خیلی خوب بود…

نه اتفاقا هستن داداشای این مدلی
و ایشالا خداحفظشون کنه

ممنون ک گوش دادین

خسته نباشید خانوم نیکنام گرامی

تازه فرصت شد مطلب شمارو بخونم.

بسیار داستان جالبی بود. ماشالا به قلمتون

ممنون که خوندید

ممنون از حسن تعریفتون

عزیزی شما.

خیلی خیلی ممنون هم از تعریفتون هم دعاتون

The weather was cold and I hadn’t warm clothes.
It was 10 o’clock and I had 2 class at 11 o’clock. I waited in bus station but didn’t come any bus. So I had to walk the street to the university. On the way, I saw a car that cames to close me and suddenly the car was stopped. I was afraid for that but I could to control my emotion.
Oh my god.
Jackkkk. What are you doing here?
You know he was one of my classmates and obviously he was handsome and cool.
He said: sorry Roz but I want to speak with you.
I said: Jack, I have 2 class. I can’t late.
But he persist.and then I agreed with him.
I said: ok Jack I listen you.
At first he was nervous and silent. But after afew minutes he went on.
Roz I fall in love but I have a problem.
I had dating trauma. And I don’t want to happen again.
When he told about his subject, I was confused. Obviously I was happy in my heart because Jack was very gentleman and I like to be his wife. When I drowned in my thoughts, suddenly he said: Roz I want to impress Angelina, can you help me?
I was very shocked, so I didn’t expect that he fell in love Angelina not me.
But I control my emotion again and said: Jack, why me? Why?
Sorry I was late. I have to go.
I have best wishes for you and your love.
Bye.
I was sad and i got jealous of Anjelina. entire day I thought about this question.
Anjelina has what I don’t have???
I cried for 25 hours . Next day I decided to develop my empowering belief and I said to my self( I’m beautiful girl and I will marriage with my true love) . It was an incantation. And said to my self every minutes on the way to university.
When I arrived , I saw that Jack stood there.
My heart was beating again but I ignored it and went on to my class and said my incantation.
When I went to my class, i saw all of my classmates weared stylish clothes and smiled at me.
Suddenly I looked at the whiteboard that it was written ( dear Roz, you are very beautiful and amazing, I fall in love you. Will you marry me?
Lover : jack)
Yesssssss. You know I forgot that my Nick name was Angelina

وااااای خدای من چه داستان بااحساسی…خیلی عالی بودخیلی خیلی زیاد…آفرین به شما:clap:

باسلام به همگی.من مدت زیادیه که نتونستم توی تالاروبحثهای فوق العاده اش شرکت کنم.امیدوارم بازهم بتونم توجمع شماعزیزان حاضربشم.درضمن ازدوستان عزیزی که برنامه های ضبط صدارومعرفی کردن خیلی ممنونم.من هم بینهایت به همچین چیزی نیازداشتم:blush:

خیلی خیلی داستان خوب و احساسی و جالبی بود همه لغاتم که تو متن گنجونده بودید و روایتون هم که بی نظیره …
تبریک میگم صداتون خیلی خوبه و بیانتون ریتم موزون و گوش نوازی داره…

سلام
ای جاااان ازییین داستاناااا
عالی بود عااالی

چه وضشهههه!!
اون دانشگا صاحاب نداره؟؟
حراستش کووووو؟!
دانشگاه آزاد بودن؟
حراااااست میخوای
حراست دانشگاه پیام نوووور
پیام نوریا قشششنگ میفهمن چی میگم

دمت گررررم عالی بود

عاااالی بود عزیزم خیلی قشنگ و احساسی بود

خیلی جذاب بود آفرییییین

سلام نسیم خانوم

بسیار داستان قشنگ و فوقالعاده ای بود

احساس و داستان جالبی بود.

این جک کیه که تو همه داستان های شما هست

دوستان فردا درس جدید رو شروع می کنیم

سلام سمیه جان مرسی که خوندین . سپاس از شما و لطفتون

سلام بر شماا . خیلی ممنون از وقتی که گذاشتین و داستانمو خوندین. بسیار لطف دارین. ممنون از حسن تعریفتون

ممنونم مژده جونی مرسی از انرژیت که همینجور سرازیره
اون دانشگاهم باس بگم که خارجه خارج. پیام نور کجا بود اخه

سلام بر محدثه بانوی گل. قربونت مرسی از توجهت

ممنونم هنگامه جان . سپاس از لطفت

سلام بر شما اقا کامبیز ممنونم
سپاس از حسن توجه و لطفتون

خب به نکته خوبی اشاره کردین ایشالاه داستان بعدی رفع ابهام میکنم

سلام دوستان قسمت چهارم حاضر شد

قسمت اول

قسمت دوم

قسمت سوم

و اما قسمت چهارم:

The setting moon was a white ball low on the horizon in a charcoal-gray sky.

The night was showing its face and the clock was tick-tocking. The thoughts made my head so dizzy that I could see things in a slow motion. It almost was like a trauma that was developing inside my chest. Some empowering fear to impress the atmosphere of the environment. It was like walking in a pool full of water. No oxygen with a smell of the near death.

Damn it… who was he? I said with opened red eyes. It was like someone was telling me to yell but at the same time holding my throat and strangling me.

I ran to my house, inhaling and exhaling like a hell full of fire.

I burst into my house, everything was in its place.

“So he didn’t take something from my house?”

Suddenly a knocking sound came from my basement…

The fear inside my chest began to arise. My breathing became shallow. My heart was beating like a drum. I went to the kitchen to find something. I opened the cabinet, nothing useful… I opened the drawers, a knife…

I took it and slowly started to walk towards basement door… almost tip toeing… The basement was the least important place of my house. I wouldn’t visit it even once in 10 years.

The damp and dark atmosphere of the basement made my heart beat even faster. I could hear its beating… I did my best to be focused and be aware.

“Is there anyone there?” I said with a shaking, trembling voice… No response…

I walked a little bit forward. The shelves of the basement was full of boxes. In one of the boxes I found a flash light.

I wished it to work, like it was my last wish of life…

And it worked…

A narrow light in the big basement full of stuff.

First I pointed it to my right side. Nothing special… some boxes full of bottles… I pointed it to my left side… and suddenly a box moved and a shadow appeared.

Ah….

Miew…

Damn it Casper…

Casper was a stray cat. A black one with ragdoll breed profile.

“Shoo…” I said with an angry feeling but at the same time with a relief of fear. Because I thought that the sound was from this cat… I sat and breathed deeply.

“Damn… is it the end? Can I be calm again?”

Still my heart was beating like a hammer nailing my chest, like it was representing this is not the end and the bad news will come by… And it came…

A laughter… a cruel… ferocious laughter… came from upstairs…

I tensed my fist on the knife and ran towards the stairs. The stairs were like 10 miles away from me… But I got there. One by one I took my legs on them and went up…

“Who are you?” I yelled from my guts.

When I got out of the basement no one was there… but an incantation could be seen on the wall.

“Soon, you will have a date with death “was written on the wall with red letters.

I was shocked and looked frozen. My glance on the wall was unblinked.

The incantation was fading as my life was fading.

“Why these things are happening to me?”

My phone rang… Slowly I put my hand in my pocket and brought the cellphone out.

It was the officer.

I needed to go to police station to fill some forms and answer some questions.

Still feeling shocked, I picked up my coat and went outside.

دوستانی که قسمت قبل رو لایک کردن:

@parisa3
@Farzad_Poodineh
@smollakochakian
@sorayya
@h.m.n
@ala
@Hengam1
@kourosh.kabir
@sara999
@mohadeseh34
@a.bayani
@fdoosti
@m-m96
@saba
@Nader-Pn

کارتون فوق العاده ، متن عالی، ویس رو هم فردا گوش میدهم چون الان ممنوعیت استفاده با هندزفری دارم. ان شاءالله که تا قسمت ۳۰ یه شاهکار ادبی ارائه میدید.

خیییییلی عالی بود واقعا افکت ها هم همه عالی بودن و قشنگ جبران وویس قبل شد احسنت بهتون همیشه تو اوج باشین

ممنون خانوم نیکنام گرامی. مرسی از لطفتون

والا تصمیم بر این شد که یه مقدار تغییر تو قسمت ها ایجاد کنم. واسه همین سی قسمت ادامه پیدا نمیکنه.

میخوام هر 5 درس یک داستان کامل باشه. یعنی درس بعدی قسمت پایانی این داستان خواهد بود

بعد داستان بعدی رو شروع میکنم

ممنون محدثه خانوم عزیز.

خوشحالم که به نظرتون جبران شد.

اشکال نداره، میشه مجموعه داستانهای آقا کامبیز