فکر می کنید چه چیزی در بزرگسالی گمه؟ یا میشه بهش اضافه کرد تا بزرگسالی رو جذاب کنه؟
می تونید انشا خودتون رو بنویسید و دوستان دیگه برای بهتر شدن شما در نوشتار بهتون کمک کنن.
قبل از شروع چند مورد رو عرض کنم:
نگران عالی بودن نباشید. سعی کنید بهترین خودتون رو بزارید. قبل از اینکه فایل رو پست کنید چند بار خودتون ویرایش کنید و بعد ارسال کنید تا کار دوستانی که قصد کمک کردن به شما دارند راحت تر شه.
یادتون باشه شما زبان آموز هستید پس از ابزار های خوب برای بهتر نوشتنتون استفاده کنید. می تونه این چالش سکوی بلندی برای بهتر شدن دایره لغاتتون باشه، به شرطی که تحقیق کنید و واژگان مناسب رو پیدا کنید. اگه سوالی داشتید می تونید تو گوگل یه نگاهی بندازید و نوشتارتون رو بهتر کنید و بعد ارسالش کنید.
گاهی وقتا حرف دل 10 خط ممکنه بیشتر بشه. به هیچ وجه اشکال نداره، شما آزادید که بیشتر بنویسید ولی یادتون باشه، نوشتار کوتاه تر فرصت این رو میده که دوستان بتونن با تمرکز بیشتری به شما در دادن فیدبک کمک کنند و همینطور تمرکز شما در بهتر شدن بیشتر خواهد شد.
من یه عمل دارم به اسم چکش زدن. وقتی فیدبکی دریافت کردید، دوباره همون متن رو بنویسید و به قول بچه ها گفتنی چکش بزنیدش تا محکم شه.
خیلی خب دوستان می تونید شروع کنید.
نکته: دوستان چالش گذشته به تعطیلات خورد و کسی در زمینه بازخورد مشارکتی نداشت. لطفا در این تاپیک نظراتتون رو با سایرین به اشتراک بزارید تا بشه پیشرفت جمعی کرد.
Adulthood is the begining of the period of responsibility .and it starts from 20 -21 years old.before this stage we are more dependant to our parents and teachers but in this period of lifespine maybe you accept in a college in a city or contry far away from your hometown you will become more independant and this is a trigger for starting a new life style and maybe you get married in the first stage of adulthood and it makes you more involved with some responsibility and liability
Unfortunately because of this liabilities people dont care abot to their excitment and happines and they only think about to do things in the best way possible or they think that they have to becom more rigid but in my oponion this is a part of our life and it’s nessesary to enjoy and use from this beautiful part of your life . If i want
To speake abot my self maybe thinking about aging make me alittle upset but generally i am so happy for being in this period of my life because my experience and abilities is more than the other part of my life and this will make me stronger for keep going across the path of life.
Adulthood is a period of human’s life which is usually defined since 20 years old in theory, but I think it depends that how much the brain has grown. Adult humans have many challenges in their life. Adulthood of a married person is absolutely different with a single one. A single person often live with lonely feeling but a married human usually feels happiness. However, marriage has many responsibilities. For example, a married man should earn more money for their family members. There is much shortage in modern life especially in Iran. The most significant of them is happiness or maybe peaceful. Most of people think that they can achieve happiness and peaceful with money. Also some people look for it in love. In my opinion, happiness and peaceful should have a big and unlimited source. The best source that I choose is God. In spite of many problems in my life, I am so happy and hopeful, because I believe due to God’s kindness, I will have the best possible life.
I can’t speak alot about adulthood and I don’t have any idea about it. But in my opinion , it’s so diffrent between childhood and teenager with adulthood. You know some people kill thier (کودک درون) and don’t enjoy the moment and life.
It’s not good due to you feel and understand every thing . I don’t like it ,just I like my childhood cause I played in every moment and I was naughty girl and all the time I played soccer with boys.
Hi, In my opinion adulthood time is great because you are able to do anything by your own. You can go anywhere without needing permission of your parents and choose your job and lifestyle that you have always wanted to have. And also you’re able to learn everything buy your own, for instance learning a new language is all up to you or you can get a driving license or buy anything that you want, you can have your bank account and do everything with your money and there is no one to ask you or force you to do anything that they want. So adulthood’s independence is a great opportunity to live your own life.
You grow up when you learn that a lot of things not important.
You grow up when you forgive, kind to every one without expectation.
You’ll be adult when you have grateful heart.
You’ll be adult when you play with children.
You’re peasfull with yourself and world.
Exactly, you grow up with love, hopefully, thrust, kind,…
When you think more and accept every one that is, now you’re adult with great feelings,
So I think, I don’t want to be an adult, although I’m attempting to be a good person, but I live with inner child every day. I don’t care about a lot of things. I’m happy and I’m satisfied. This is my rules for adulthood.