چالش wsd با موضوع « یک خاطره خوب تعریف کنید »

[terme.javadi4878]

Hi friends
Now I wanna talk about the story that made me laugh at the class and my teacher got angry.
There was a intellectual teacher who was able to solve very tough problems without looking books even for a once.
Each person who had question had asked him and he had answered them quickly.
But there was a secret.
He had a particular paper that he was watching for a moment as he solved the problems.
all his students were diesirous to know what was written on that paper.
they tried a lot but they coulden’t underestand and also they didn’t let owns to ask him.
Until he died.
students explored to find the paper and finally they found it.
so what do you guess about the content of paper???

[YoKambiz]

دمت گرم فرزاد بابت کمک و فید بک هات

[Farzad_Poodineh]

@YoKambiz

دمت گرم فرزاد بابت کمک و فید بک هات

چاکرم مشتی

[Farzad_Poodineh]

@terme.javadi4878

so what do you guess about the content of paper???

I think it was a quote or something written on that paper.

[smollakochakian]

بچه ها اشکالات من رو هم بگید خوشحال میشم.
من در این چالش شرکت کردم برای بهتر شدنم.

[terme.javadi4878]

no no no it’s wrong .another guess please.
think more

[YoKambiz]

@smollakochakian

I want Define for you about one of Adventures of our journey.

اینجا مفهوم یکم گنگ شده

فکر میکنم به این شکل بهتر باشه:

I want to write about one of the adventures we had

define

مفهوم معنی کردن میده. واسه همین به این جمله نمیخوره. میتونید از کلماتی مثل express، explain، talk و… برای رسوندن منظورتون استفاده کنید

@smollakochakian

A few years ago we with my uncle went to North

فک میکنم به جای کلمه with از and استفاده شه بهتره

@smollakochakian

There have Castle named rodkhan

there, has a castle named Rodkhan.

@smollakochakian

There’s way was so long for our

Its path was so long for us

@smollakochakian

Maybe you know There is a thousand steps and it takes two hours until you reach the top of the castle.

there are one thousand steps

@smollakochakian

We we’re tired until we reached on top of castle

we became tired till we reached the top of the castle.

@smollakochakian

But them were so happy

but they were so happy

شرمنده کمی دیر شد

[mohadeseh34]

به متنای ماهم یه دستی بکشید اقا کامبیز

[smollakochakian]

ممنون بابت راهنمایی هاتون آقا کامبیز. چقدر خوب کلی نکته ریز یاد گرفتم.

[terme.javadi4878]

He always mixed up the places of tow simple things and the content of the paper was
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[Farzad_Poodineh]

Oh! How cool
I couldn’t answer it after one thousand years.

[Hengam1]

دوستان کی موضوع عوض میشه؟ فعلا راجع به این بنویسیم؟ من نوشتم ولی دارم دوباره

[YoKambiz]

این چالش دو هفته ایه.

یک شنبه موضوع جدید شروع میشه.

اگه باز دارید چیزی بنویسید هنگامه خانوم

[fdoosti]

@Hengam1

5 years ago my family and I went to Ramsar. The weather was rainy in summer that was cool for us. I had beautiful moment of there now I visualiz there in my mind cause I love it , after that we went in north, it was rainy too. I love rain. One day my bro and I watched sea suddenly my brother heard sth when we sae sea we found a kid that need help. (Nearly he drowned) .
My brother rescued the kid.My brother is a hero man.

Hi
I think these points are impressive:

1. visualiz visualize is true
2. sae saw is true
3. nearly he drowned it is better to say it was closed to drown
   It was exciting memory

[fdoosti]

@afarkhani

My best memories come back to my childhood. When we went to my grandfather’s house in the village. I remember that We tease the mole, and We were put our hands into his kennel.
It’s now 13 days since my grandfather’s death, I’m so sad about my grandfather’s absence

Hi friend
Sorry for your grandfather’s death
I just saw a point that i think should be change:
that We The second word is not normally capitalized
you write good, remember all of us are here to make mistake and learn

[afarkhani]

@fdoosti

capitalized

ممنون فاطمه جان. اصلا به این توجه نکردم ، یادم باشه بیشتر دقت کنم
ممنون از توجهت

[a.bayani]

Oh my god
its very intresting

@Farzad_Poodineh

I couldn’t answer it after one thousand years.

yes . me too

[fdoosti]

@YoKambiz

There I was on a bus.

The bus was playing a music. a happy music that could make a chicken dance like Khordadian.

We were going to Saghalaksar. it’s a beautiful place which has lots of trees and green-lands.

I and my friend Shayan were there, everyone was snapping their fingers in unison singing the song which is illegal in Iran.

suddenly someone brought a tombak out and started playing on it.

and guess what? I was just singing the song Lochan .

everyone was shocked but suddenly everyone started singing with me, even the driver.

we got there and we had lots of fun.

I think it was one of the memorial moments of my life that we had lots of fun with our college friends.

dance, sing, kebab. lots of good moments.

It was so funny
a happy A happy
it’s a beautiful It’s
I and my friend Shayan place the second person first My friend Shayan and I…
a tombak If tombak be an equipment it is uncountable and do not need ’ a’ Im not sure
suddenly Suddenly
everyone Everyone

[fdoosti]

@atineh1967

Since I was a child, me and my brother went to the store, we were happy and laugh.
We didnt see nothing, til one huge, big, “Lari” rooster ran toward us like dragon.
We ran away,
Oh oh, ouch.
Suddenly the big rooster was attacking to my brother’s ass.
That rooster was succeeded.
My brother hurted.
Sometimes we remembered that memory, and we laught at it

me and my brother My brother and I
store, we store. We
didnt see did not or didn’t
“Lari” rooster Lari the rooster
we laught at laugh
My brother hurted got hurt is true

[fdoosti]

Hello fiend

@a.bayani

remember memory

It is nice to say: i couldn’t remember anything

@a.bayani

Finally I

Finally, I

@a.bayani

But I didn’t beat myself up

it is just a little bit confusing for me,like translate from farsi
you can say i did not do any action or something like this

@a.bayani

of platform

of the/a platform, and

@a.bayani

he push

he pushes us

@a.bayani

we survived.

Thanks God for saving my friend