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Hello highly energetic remembers of zabanshenas. You’re listening to Milad.
This is my first mini story, Emotional Mastery 1.
VANILLA
Vanilla had a friend named Warren Buffett. They wanted to get rich.
Warren Buffet hated educating. He abandoned education and went to New York; and there he bought some stocks. Since he knew many rich people in New York,(emmm) he became a good stocks buyer (buyer of stocks ✓). They helped him. They offered him some good choices in stock(s) buying. After one year, he became very rich, the number one rich man in New York.
Now let’s know about Vanilla. Vanilla continued educating and was graduated as a writer.
He(She ✓) started to write a book named “how to have a better marks in exams”. But since people in her country didn’t read books, her books weren’t sold and she failed in getting money. She failed in getting rich. She became poor. She decided to change her decision. She went to Cesar’s casino. She played on a blackjack table and started to gambling(gamble ✓). But unfortunately, she lost all her money.
Did she give up? No she didn’t!
She went to Alaska. Next, he(she ✓) bigan to dig for gold. After several days, she didn’t find any gold but some very very tiny one.
She felt sad. She felt depressed.
Why she couldn’t get rich?!
She remembered her teacher('s) sentences. He used to say them in the beginning of his class:
Deep breathing, shoulders back, a very big crazy grin on your face…
and then he started teaching.
She did all of those steps. Now, she was very happy . She went to Singapore and started a chili business. In his(her ✓) business, she became successful. She became very rich, more than all of the people in Alaska.
that is the end of my first mini story.
We find out that the education didn’t(don’t ✓) guarantee our success.
Goodbye
(Thanks a lot for your helping and motivation @YoKambiz @R.min)
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