This is my first talk, so I had some mistakes and pause during this Talk.
, This is my first retelling story about child slavery
please listen to it and help me with your comments and correct my mistakes .thank you for your consideration .
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Hi
that was great 
i wish you will be the best
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Your effort is commendable
Good luck 
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