سلام متن غلط املایی نداره، ولی حس میکنم جمله بندی هام و ترتیب قرار گیری زمانهای افعال و گرامر یکم خشک و اشتباه هست ممنون میشم اگه بتونید اشتباهاتم رو تو این متن تصحیح کنید… ahmad has degree in mechanic engineering from shiraz University, when he finished University , he forced to go to the militry sevice, it tooks 2 yeas of him to finished militry service. after that he decided to look for a job but he couldnt find a job which matched with his carrier. unsure of his next step, he is spent his days and nights Learning English by himself. afterward he decided to take the IELTS exam. two weeks ago he received his results of the exam and he had succeeded to got the 7 score. Now he is going to apply for a University in London and he wants to change his degree from mechanic engineering to power engineering
Ahmad has a degree in mechanic engineering from shiraz University***.*** After finishing his university , he had to go to the militry sevice which took him 2 years to finish it. After that he decided to look for a job but he couldnt find a job matched with his carrier. Unsure of his next step, he spent his days and nights Learning English by himself. Afterwards he decided to take the IELTS exam. Two weeks ago, he received his exam results, showing that he had succeeded to get the 7 score. Now he is going to apply for a University in Lon***don and he wants to change his degree from mechanic engineering to power engineering
ممنون🙏
یه سوال: اونجا که از past perfect استفاده کردم
had succeeded بعد از past perfect مگه معمولاً از past simple استفاده نمیشه شما از present simple استفاده کردید…
جمله من
had succeeded to got
جمله شما
had succeeded to get
ممنون میشم راهنمایی کنید چون بیشتر با
past perfect مشکل دارم و همیشه تو استفاده کردن ازش به مشکل میخورم!
گذشته ساده و ماضی بعید دو عبارت جداگانه میان، اینجا یک جمله است و برای تکمیل فعل موفق شدن از یک عبارت مصدری استفاده شده است.