تمرین رایتینگ - مشکلات

[matinrohany]

Hi there

@Ghabel

Please give me feedback, I’ll appreciate it.

Sure, I’ll try

@Ghabel

exceedingly

I think “excessively” could be better

@Ghabel

step by step.

Well said

@Ghabel

are getting worse by passing time

get worse* as time passes

@Ghabel

solve

be solved*

@Ghabel

have done

have be* done

@Ghabel

decipher

I think overcome* or solve* would be better

Thank you so much for participating Enjoyed your views on the matter

[gisoo13]

@matinrohany

Right, but too good to be true

It’s impossible because the ones who can help don’t have the empathy, and those who have the empathy can offer only so little. It makes a perfect paradox like most of the things in this world. The thing is, even small acts are better than none, and they can lead to bigger ones. “A true act if good will always sparks another”. Goodness can be contagious.

@matinrohany

You know, it’s not meant to be taken literally. It means the important thing in facing a problem is not actually the problem itself. It’s the solution

I’m not going to say that I got what you said because I didn’t.

@matinrohany

I can’t find anything here, you did a great job writing this

Ok, thank you.

[Nargesiammm]

Thank you very much

[Paria851]

Thankful🌹

No, I mean disconnection and internet problems

[matinrohany]

Hi there

@hbk11981

Honestly, I took a long time on how to start writing on this topic.

Thank you, for sharing your opinion

@hbk11981

Some problems aren’t solvable. Therefore, try not to suffer.

Simple spell but quite unbreakable

@hbk11981

Realistic people better deal with issues than idealistic ones. The more realistic a person is, the easier they handle problems.

Exactly

@hbk11981

Don’t wish anyone not to have any problems because there is no such thing. To be blunt, all belief systems are trouble-making. This is my saying, " the human body has been exploited by the sly humans’ mind since the creation". To have fewer problems, you should have an empty head, no belief.

I totally agree, and well said

Thank you so much for participating Really enjoyed reading your essay.

[matinrohany]

@gisoo13

Goodness can be contagious.

I guess that could be true

@gisoo13

I’m not going to say that I got what you said because I didn’t.

اینطور نیست که منظور جمله باشه که مشکلات اصلا مهم نیستن. منظور اینه که توی مواجهه با مشکلات، چیزی که بیشتر اهمیت داره راه حلیه که واسه‌شون ارائه می‌دیم، نه خود مشکلی که باهاش مواجه شدیم.

@gisoo13

thank you.

You’re welcome

[matinrohany]

My pleasure ‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎

[matinrohany]

Oh right Poor internet connections…
You’re totally right

@Paria851

Thankful🌹

My pleasure

[Ghabel]

Thank you so much

[matinrohany]

@hbk11981

Which is more suitable to be written :

The first step is accepting / to accept

Well… both seem correct
I don’t know why, but I guess I have a better feeling about to-infinitive But, my suggestion is using a noun: “acceptance”

[matinrohany]

My pleasure ‎‎‎‎‎‎‎

[mortezadorry]

Hi dear Matin what’s up
Problems have become a routine in our lives and everyone consume alot energy and time to overcome them, but statistics shows usually we have some kinda problems which are not going to be solved, they take so much time and resources and ommit our valuable time
Alas, there are so many problems which are unsolvable but we can use our energy for roots, to evaluate basic and foundational problems in our lives
You know it has a ripple effect, suppose you throw a tiny stone in a pond or lake and it creates lots of waves, solving main problems is exactly like that.
I guess biggest problem in our world is a kinda conflict between nations and we need conflict resolution.
Problems are like opportunities hell yeah that’s awesome. We use weights and lift them to become stronger and stronger, problems are in the same way, when we lift a fifty pound weight, do we keep lifting it for whole season? Hell no that weight is like an opportunity and it makes us stronger physically and problems make us stronger mentally.
Now I want to quote a sentence which says in difficult days don’t think about the leafs you lose, think about roots you are making stronger
Thank you, I appreciate your feedback

[yourname]

@matinrohany
I know I owe you an apology. I have no idea what I was thinking yesterday. I do not normally behave that way.

By the way, I just wanted to tell you how sorry I am for my lack of courtesy. And thanks for the time.

[dorsa48]

Hi👋
Sometimes we need to just relax and don’t think too much cause can’t handle anything. Eventually we can’t control the result of anything so we just persue our way and see what happen.
Unfortunately there is lots of serious problems around the world which we can’t solve most of them. I think nowadays we must be thinkless (I’m not sure it’s a world ) to live and to don’t suffer.
Well, I’m architecture student and these days I’m really out of the society_mostly because of pandemy _and it has really bad effects on my mood and my learning process and finding partners couse architecture needs strong teamwork. Also the artistic point of architecture is fade. I don’t want to nagge. If I want to say all the problems it takes lots of time.
Actually most of the things created because of a problem so, problem is opportunity if you solve it.
Please give me feedback on my essay

[YoKambiz]

@matinrohany

• What problems do you come across in your work or life? (Since we’re living in Iran, I know you have a lot to share)

Awww, you went there, ha? :))

My biggest challenge is the price of electronic devices. Since I’m a content creator, I have a hard time upgrading my gear.

@matinrohany

o you feel that problems are opportunities? Why or why not?

problems are meant to be solved, so yeah, I consider them opportunities cause even if you don’t need to solve any of them, there will be some people who need your help. So if you’re a good problem solver, you can make a living out of it.

In my honest opinion being assertive is super important when it comes to problems. Because problems take action to be solved. For instance, as a content creator, I always tackle problems related to learning English, and people always find my content useful.

Another thing I should add is problems are necessary for life because they can give you a chance to grow and become a better human being. That’s it.

Thanks Matin, for the topic.

[matinrohany]

Hi there, dear Morteza Everything’s fine, thanks for asking

@mortezadorry

Thank you, I appreciate your feedback

Sure, I’ll try

@mortezadorry

consume

consumes*

@mortezadorry

alot

a lot of*

@mortezadorry

shows

show*

@mortezadorry

usually we

that we usually

@mortezadorry

ommit

I think here, “waste” would be better

@mortezadorry

biggest

the* biggest

@mortezadorry

whole

a* whole

@mortezadorry

leafs

leaves

@mortezadorry

conflict

the* conflict

@mortezadorry

problems are in the same way

Great analogy

@mortezadorry

in difficult days don’t think about the leafs you lose, think about roots you are making stronger

That’s beautiful Thank you, for participating dear Morteza Enjoyed reading your essay

[matinrohany]

Oh, I’m really sorry I didn’t mean to leave your response, unanswered I must’ve missed it.

@yourname

Are you sure? Because I am not.

Maybe… You know, can’t argue with Nietzsche

@yourname

They may not necessarily kill you/take your body, but they do not make you stronger, either.

That might be true.
But I believe every single experience helps you grow a little.

@yourname

I owe you an apology.

Oh, come on.
It was totally fine, you didn’t do anything wrong at all You behaved totally well

@yourname

And thanks for the time.

It’s my pleasure

[matinrohany]

Hi there

@dorsa48

Please give me feedback on my essay

Sure, I’ll try

@dorsa48

happen

happens*

@dorsa48

is

are*

@dorsa48

thinkless (I’m not sure it’s a world )

Well, it’s not actually
But, close enough You can use “thoughtless”.

@dorsa48

I’m architecture student

I’m an* architecture student.

@dorsa48

pandemy

the* pandemic*

@dorsa48

it has really

it really has

@dorsa48

couse

cause/because

@dorsa48

point

“aspect” would be better here

@dorsa48

nagge

nag*

@dorsa48

created

are* created

@dorsa48

opportunity

an* opportunity

Thank you, for participating Enjoyed reading your essay

[matinrohany]

Hi there, dear Kambiz

@YoKambiz

Awww, you went there, ha? :))

It’s hard to be an Iranian these days…

@YoKambiz

My biggest challenge is the price of electronic devices. Since I’m a content creator, I have a hard time upgrading my gear.

I can vouch for that

@YoKambiz

problems are meant to be solved, so yeah, I consider them opportunities cause even if you don’t need to solve any of them, there will be some people who need your help. So if you’re a good problem solver, you can make a living out of it.

Well said It really works like that.

@YoKambiz

In my honest opinion being assertive is super important when it comes to problems.

Right, giving up is not an option these days.

@YoKambiz

Another thing I should add is problems are necessary for life because they can give you a chance to grow and become a better human being. That’s it.

Totally agreed.

@matinrohany

I believe every single experience helps you grow a little.

Thank you, for participating I really admire this strong-minded and “tough-to-beat” attitude of yours.

[matinrohany]

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