چالش دیدگاه من - درس اول انگلیسی قدرت

سلام
روز پنجم
خدایی فقط خواستم از کلمه ها تو جمله
استفاده کنم همین
فقط مدیوووووونید اگه فکر کنید خوابم میومد و علللکی سروتهشو هم اووردم
اگه ایراد جمله بندی و گرامری داشتم
ممنون میشم اصلاح کنید

There was a policeman and his name was Abby.
Abby had a strong subconscious.
He engages everything very well.
On Saturday he was at home for rest.he turned off the phone and wanted that day just for his self.he ate junk food and saw the movie at the same time; after that, he slept.
In his dream was a woman that she screamed and cried in the sea.
Suddenly he woke up and said: ok it was just a dream
So he took his phone and turn on it
My god; my boss calls me 14 times; what’s happening?!
He wore his clothes and go out; his boss call again and said: go to the sea Abby; they need your help; just hurry up.
He went there and suddenly saw a woman with a surfboard on the sea.
She cried and screamed.
Abby remembered Dream of himself so he jumped into the sea and saved her