Reduced Relative Clauses

Human traffickers also target people who are emotionally vulnerable, especially teenagers and children who feel lonely and unloved and are desperate to feel ‘special’.

Is it true to change the previous structure into a reduced one like this:

Human traffickers also target emotionally vulnerable people, especially teenagers and children feeling lonely and unloved and are desperate to feel ‘special’.

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I don’t think so
I think the first explanation better than the second one especially in spoken and when you talk with others
I mean the first one is more generally than the last one

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