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Some parents believe that watching TV programs lead to over-weight in children.

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lead → leads
over-weight → overweight is correct. It falls into closed compounds, not hyphenated ones.

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leads
درسته. مورد اول که گفتید درسته. دوم نه کاملا.

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Not perfectly? :grin:
I’m afraid to say that’s another mistake in your sentence and it should be corrected.

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دو تا غلط داره. بعد از جرند ( فعل + ing) فعل سوم شخص میباشد. غلط دوم بعد از
lead to
باید اسم بیاید نه صفت.
Overweightness

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You get it wrong.
Overweight can be a noun, too. If you’re not sure, you can look it up in Collins dictionary.
I was aware it should be noun after leads to. :wink:

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میزان من فقط و فقط لانگ منه. دیکشنری فله زیاده.

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Yo, OK, you’re right. Collins dic. is kinda shit but I’m not intended to capture image of my medical reference book written by American author, Barbara Janson Cohen where it uses overweight as a noun.
Take it easy, be more flexible.
My preferred dic. is Oxford but I make use of other dictionaries too.

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My source is long man , I used overweight and examiner corrected.

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