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Covid-19 virus also known as Corona is a major problem which it is less than one year but it,s sucking humans blood, typically in less than 6 month Corona killed about 500,000 people around the world and afflicted more than 8M
In the incidence of Corona and attempting goverments to Stop it,s outbreak we could see the reality of western countries, what the medias never said before and it was covered under their movies and it,s medias. Additionally, lots of people because of what they had heard or seen in medias about the first-world country like US, UK, Italy, etc, they lost their belived in self.
We could get back that confident about our country and ability when we saw they are not what they showed.
Nevertheless, Corona virus showed us our weak points which are a lot too.
We could see ourselves when didn,t give a shit to hygienic protocls. Furthermore We mustn,t be silent about approach of greedy persons in hoarding mask and gloves and their misuse from essential necessity of people at the first days.
After several months, the first topic of today is about this virus and we have no defence againt it. In conclusion the single thing that is possible to do is using mask and other hygienic points to
save ourselves and Stop Corona,s movement.

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