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باز گویی داستان رابین هود

سلام دوستان عزیز. من داستان رابین هود رو بازنویسی کردم و یک بار هم خودم چک کردم حتی الامکان اشتباهی نباشه. خیلی خیلی ممنون میشم شما هم لطف کنید نظراتتون بگید.

Robin Hood:

Robin Hood is someone who heard many tales about him. No one knows if he was a real person or a legendary character. The legends say that Robin was extremely intelligent and so humour. Also, he was a professional archer and always carried a bow and arrow. He wore warrior clothes like a hat with a green feather.

Robin lived in Sherwood forest with a huge group of criminals or outlaws known as his ‘Merry Men’. The group included Friar Tuck and someone who called Little John but he was unusually tall also Robins true love, Maid Marian.

Sherwood Forest was a royal hunting forest in Nottingham in England. People had terrible imagination of the place. People travelling through the forest were often robbed by outlaws.

The stories say that Robin wasn’t a usual thief. He just robbed from rich people so that he could give it to people who needed it. So after a while, he became famous with this feature.

The Sheriff of Nottingham was Robin’s arch enemy. This was the sheriff’s job to keep the wood safe and to make sure that nobody stole the king’s deer. Although his thought would never became true and he never succeeded.

Centuries ago people loved to tell each other stories about Robin hood but by overtime, he had never been forgotten and nowadays people mention him with modern ways like films, theatre, TV and Just like before, literature.

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و در اینجا هم حس نیاز و کمک گرفتن از دوستان پایه بالا و پیشرو به شدت احساس میسه.
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اینجا به جای humor باید از کلمه humorous استفاده بشه چون به یه صفت نیاز داریم نه اسم!

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Imaginations باید باشه

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سلام خانوم ماریا خیلی خیلی ممنونم ک وقت گذاشتید. علت همه موارد رو متوجه شدم. جز این آخری. اونو امکانش هست توضیح بدبد

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