تمرین رایتینگ - دروغ سفید

[dorsa48]

Hello
1.I don’t lie but I don’t tell anything anytime. I don’t mean hide something I mean bold more necessary issues.
3. I don’t this telling with lie is okay because eventually people notice the and feel foolish so we should try to tell the truth in a nice way.
4.lieing could completely destroyed the trust.
5.I considered with lie more harmless than lie because it’s from a person who likes you but they are not comfortable with you or don’t consider you as a logical person. Even though I must admire that the truth is heart full sometimes.
Please give me a fide back

[yourname]

Hey there!

There was this girl, I remember who did something wrong. All but everyone accused her of, of not being the way she was supposed to be, of not to act the way she was supposed to act, according to the tribe she shared her blood with the most. Because people in a tribe have almost a similar way of thinking, their beliefs are more of a piece to name a few. So as I noticed, there is this illusion that people put themselves open to in these kinds of situations; a fantasy in which each and every member of the same tribe possesses well and truly much the same thoughts in those certain things and having such thoughts lead to presumably same actions and if you’re the one who isn’t acting the way you are supposed to act, then the blames are on you.

I saw her friends provoke her into refusing to have done such a thing, to use a white lie in her defense, but every time they tried, she precisely refused to do so which was per se peculiar, adorable and wrong altogether.

White lies are literally and figuratively lies with glorious names we give to them to protect no one but our egos.
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I would be very grateful to receive your feedback.

[soltani80]

سلام چالش جدید جمعه رو نمیذارید؟

[matinrohany]

Hi there

@dorsa48

Please give me a fide back

Sure

@dorsa48

1.I don’t lie but I don’t tell anything anytime.

I’m not sure what you meant, but maybe you could say
I don’t lie, but I also don’t tell everything all the time.

@dorsa48

I don’t this telling with lie is okay

I don’t think telling white lies is okay because eventually people will notice, and feel foolish (for trusting us).

@dorsa48

4.lieing could completely destroyed the trust.

Lying could completely destroy the trust.

@dorsa48

5.I considered with lie more harmless than lie because it’s from a person who likes you but they are not comfortable with you or don’t consider you as a logical person. Even though I must admire that the truth is heart full sometimes.

I consider white lies less harmful than the other lies.

The truth is hurtful sometimes.

Thank you, Dorsa Enjoyde your views on the matter

[matinrohany]

Hi there!

@yourname

I would be very grateful to receive your feedback.

Sure I’ll try

@yourname

All but everyone

Sorry, I’m not sure I’m able to understand this part
You meant, “everyone”?

@yourname

not to act

not acting*

@yourname

precisely

I’m not sure about using this one as an adverb here
I mean, maybe “definitely” could be a better a choice

@yourname

provoke

provoking*

@yourname

no one

nothing*

@yourname

White lies are literally and figuratively lies with glorious names we give to them to protect no one but our egos.

That was great

Enjoyed your essay, dear Raha

[matinrohany]

سلام، ظهرتون بخیر

بله می‌خواستم امروز بعد از ظهر بذارم چالش بعدی رو.

عذر می‌خوام بابت نامنظم بودنش، حتما سعی می‌کنم با نظم بهتری ادامه بدم گذاشتن چالش‌های هفتگی رو

[yourname]

@matinrohany

You meant, “everyone

No. I meant ‘almost’ everyone.

@matinrohany

I mean, maybe “definitely” could be a better a choice

Apparently, I’m not good at choosing appreciate words. ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ

@matinrohany

Enjoyed your essay, dear Raha

Thanks. (◕ᴗ◕✿)

By the way, I’m waiting for your next challenge. You have them every 10 days, huh?

[matinrohany]

@yourname

Apparently, I’m not good at choosing appreciate words. ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ

Oh, no. Don’t say that. It was just a suggestion

@yourname

By the way, I’m waiting for your next challenge. You have them every 10 days, huh?

Well, actually every week.

I’m gonna post one, tonight

[soltani80]

mamnoon azatoon :

[matinrohany]

My pleasure ‎‎‎‎‎‎

[yourname]

@matinrohany

Well, actually every week.

I meant writing challenges. As I know you have both writing and speaking challenges. So yeah…

@matinrohany

Oh, no. Don’t say that. It was just a suggestion

Well, your suggestion was good, but the word I used there wasn’t appreciate for that situation. I didn’t know it and you mentioned it to me which was great. I like to improve my writing skills and to do that, l cannot go without getting feedback from others. I try my best to write correctly, but I know in my bones it’s not enough. .

[matinrohany]

@yourname

I meant writing challenges

I’ll post another by the end of the week Stay tuned

@yourname

I like to improve my writing skills and to do that, l cannot go without getting feedback from others.

I’ll try my best to help as much as I can.
But as an English student, I was never interested in writing or grammar rules
And now, as a learner, I’m still not But I’ll try my best

@yourname

I try my best to write correctly, but I know in my bones it’s not enough. .

Don’t worry. You’ll get there. Just remember how you learned Persian, right? It took time

[yourname]

@matinrohany

I’ll try my best

Many thanks.
BTW, grammar books are really boring. Who likes them? Novels are way much better.

[matinrohany]

Yeah, exactly

Who needs it? You’ll get there eventually

[yourname]

@yourname

Apparently, I’m not good at choosing appreciate words.

Why on earth did I use an inappropriate word here for crying out loud? Appreciate or appropriate?

@matinrohany

You’ll get there eventually

Yes, I will.

[matinrohany]

Actually, I wanted to say, but I didn’t
And see? You found out yourself

Yeah, “I’m not good at choosing the appropriate words”.