تمرین رایتینگ - عادات

[yourname]

@matinrohany

Sure I’ll try

Thank you.

@matinrohany

Feel free to talk as much as you want.

What? First you say,

@matinrohany

First of all, please remember, try not to let it exceed 200 words.

and then, you tell me something completely different. I don’t get it. What’s wrong with you?
Joking aside, thanks.

@matinrohany

I think when you’re using the word “encounter” as a verb, you can omit using “with”
So:
encounter people who…*

Yes, you are right.

@matinrohany

Thank you, Raha
Enjoyed your writing

Thank you, too.

[matinrohany]

@Reyhaneh_Nazary

Here this expertion means ''راه اومدن، کنار اومدن"
‘‘Follow with the tide’’

Yeah, but I’ve heard “go with the tide”
or “follow the tide” before. I thought maybe you mean either one of these
But, are you sure about “follow with”?

@Reyhaneh_Nazary

I used grammer of wish
Wish + Simple past

Yeah, you’re right. My bad
I often use “I hope” and something felt unnatural about using past simple But you’re totally right, I should’ve remembered from the subjunctive rule for “were”

[matinrohany]

@yourname

and then, you tell me something completely different. I don’t get it. What’s wrong with you?
Joking aside, thanks.

Those are for our newbies. You guys feel free

@yourname

Thank you, too.

You’re welcome

[yourname]

@matinrohany

Those are for our newbies. You guys feel free

I can’t wait to hear your next challenge.

[Reyhaneh_Nazary]

@matinrohany

But, are you sure about “follow with”?

Maybe I should doubt my knowledge to improve.
But I read it in a English channel though, it can be totally incorrect.

@matinrohany

Yeah, you’re right. My bad

I see, No problem I have had thousands of this problem in English
Thanks really I reviewed all grammers

@matinrohany

past simple

God…
The funniest mistake of my life!

[matinrohany]

@yourname

I can’t wait to hear your next challenge.

That would be tomorrow
Speaking time

[matinrohany]

@Reyhaneh_Nazary

But I read it in a English channel though, it can be totally incorrect.

No, no. If you’ve read it somewhere before, it’s alright

@Reyhaneh_Nazary

Thanks really I reviewed all grammers

It turned out well, then

@Reyhaneh_Nazary

The funniest mistake of my life!

[Reyhaneh_Nazary]

@matinrohany

Speaking time

I agree with that you said

@matinrohany

If you’ve read it somewhere before, it’s alright

Yep
Thank youuu🌼

[DorsaKl]

@matinrohany

That would be tomorrow
Speaking time

-“آخ جون” in english…

[yourname]

But as you know, I’m not taking part in your speaking challenges, so by saying your next challenge, I mean your next writing challenge.

[dorsa48]

Hi

1. I think we acquire them from our goals and belifs and it might be from our culture or against it.
2. I’m messy so I’ve got a problem with my mom and also all of my roommates at dorm (خوابگاه دانشگاه) are really neat. If my opinion is against someones opinion I said it and some times it makes argument.I think tolerance is necessary but it’s really hard I can’t like everyone.
3. I put all of the things in my closet so my room is less messy . For the second habit, I talk to people in logical and calm way but sometimes they make ma crazy so I would stop talking and try to go away.
4. I’m diligent and I’m kind and I’m not judging people.
5. In my viewpoint if we had a reson for specific habits, we could persou it. We must be positive and don’t give up.
   I’m looking for your feedback. Thanks a lot

[matinrohany]

Hi there, Dorsa

@dorsa48

I’m looking for your feedback. Thanks a lot

Sure I’ll try

@dorsa48

dorm

the* dorm

@dorsa48

someones

someone’s

@dorsa48

I said it

I would say it*

@dorsa48

some times

sometimes*

@dorsa48

makes

maybe “causes* arguments” would be better

@dorsa48

in logical and calm way

in a* logical and calm way

Thank you, for participating

[soltani80]

Hey guys
this challenge seems cool and let’s start it

@matinrohany

Are we born with our bad habits? Or do we acquire them from the environment surrounding us?

I think we acquire them from environment and people who are around us such as our family,i don’t think that a child can be bad or has bad habit.

@matinrohany

What bad habits do you have? Name two or three of them. How do they annoy other people?

I think i’m kind of growler and one of my habits is nagging alot of times,another bad habit that i have is eating alot of sugar I really hate this habits i know eating alot of sugar is gonna sick me

@matinrohany

Do you try to break them? How can you get rid of them?

I have to be patient more and stop complaining about things,i have to accept it’s impossible that every thing can be like what i want and i cannot control every thing ,maybe this way will help me to stop nagging

@matinrohany

What are some of your good habits?

my kindness and helpness habits are my good habits:blush:

@matinrohany

How can we develop/form a good habit?

we have to try and practice alot and we have to believe and repeat it to our mind,do it more and more is gonna form that in us
tnx for this challenge i’m wating for your feedbacs and i would know my mistakes
bye bye

[matinrohany]

Hi there

@soltani80

tnx for this challenge i’m wating for your feedbacs and i would know my mistakes

Sure I’ll try

@soltani80

environment

the* environment

@soltani80

or has bad habit.

or have* a* bad habit

@soltani80

growler

a* growler

@soltani80

this

these*

@soltani80

sick me

make me sick*

@soltani80

patient more

more patient*

@soltani80

helpness

helpfulness*

Thank you so much Enjoyed your writing

[Y_zarei]

Hi

@matinrohany

Are we born with our bad habits? Or do we acquire them from the environment surrounding us?

You know it’s different I think
Some habits are for when we born and some are habits that we acquire them from the environment surrounding us

@matinrohany

What bad habits do you have? Name two or three of them

BAD HABITS
well , I usually drink three glasses of water in lunch and again three glasses in dinner it’s 6 glasses of water I mean but I know drinking water when we’re eating food isn’t good habit and of course healthy
But it’s my BAD HABIT what shall I do?
and the second one : I get angry very quickly

@matinrohany

Do you try to break them? How can you get rid of them?

@matinrohany

How can we develop/form a good habit?

First of all, we must focus on quitting or creating the desired habit and not be careless in the middle of the road

I’m looking for your feedback

[matinrohany]

@Y_zarei

Hi

Hi there, Yeganeh

@Y_zarei

I’m looking for your feedback

Sure, I’ll try

@Y_zarei

we born

we’re born

@Y_zarei

we acquire them from

we acquire from

@Y_zarei

in lunch

during the

@Y_zarei

in dinner

during the

@Y_zarei

good

a good

@Y_zarei

what shall I do?

I used to be like that Make it harder. Do not bring water to the table at least

@Y_zarei

and the second one : I get angry very quickly

All of us do

Thanks for participating

[zg2000]

Hi there
First i think we creat habits and them dont born whit us and also our situation is very important becuace sometimes if we have a bad situation or a bad lifestyal we creat a bad habits’ for example chewing nails
2 )i had a bad habit and that was when I was nerves or I was sad i was plucking my eyebrows but now i break this bad habit and now I am so happy about that
3) yes as I mentioned that I broke that habit and that wasn’t easy and when i practiced to become calm and relax I could break that bad habit
4 )now i practice to creat great habits and I am in the first way of that and I hope to continue that great habits for example I practice to get up early and maybe i can say I was successful in that(thank god ) and another a good habit I create that was I make a dailyplane to study English
5) if you want to develop your habits you should set a good goal and everyday you should ask yourself that realy you want that ?and remember there are somedays maybe you are not in a peak state and you will fail its ok" be relax and than continue to reach your goal

If you can give me a feedback thank you so much and also im so sorry because i think it is 221words

[mortezadorry]

,Hi there again
Habits such a though-provoking topic
Well habits are our daily routine activities or behaviors which we do them regularly and these habits determines who we are going to be in the future.
Habits gradually weaken, spoil or fortify and strengthen us thus it’s very important which habits we choose to have, for instance if you brush your teeth every night regularly and you do it properly your teeth will not be rotten in future then you are not obligated to bear lots of pain in a dentist clinic by the way prices in this area are extremely high.
We born with our bad habits and we also aquire some of them from environment, for instance my mother usually scratch her head since it itches thus it’s not her fault of course she can buy some products from pharmacy to cure it on the other hand I always brush my teeth and use florid solutions to protect them because I don’t want to suffer in a dentist clinic.
I have some bad habits but they don’t hurt others.
My first bad habit is staying awake until wee hours of the night and then sleeping around nine hours imagine how much it can pull me back in my life
Yeah I try to break them but it needs lots of energy.
Some of my good habits are exercising, reading books, interacting with my friends and family

[matinrohany]

Hi there

@zg2000

If you can give me a feedback thank you so much and also im so sorry because i think it is 221words

That’s totally okay I’ll try my best

@zg2000

them dont born whit us

and we’re not born with them

@zg2000

creat a bad habits’

develope

@zg2000

was plucking my eyebrows

Oh, I used to do that too

@zg2000

now i break this bad habit and now I am so happy about that

I’ve broken

@zg2000

relax

relaxed*

@zg2000

first way

the beginning

@zg2000

that great habits

doing those*

@zg2000

another a good habit I create

another good habit I developed

@zg2000

dailyplane

daily plan

@zg2000

realy you want that ?

do you really want that?

@zg2000

its

it’s

Thank you so much for participating

[matinrohany]

Hi there, dear Morteza

@mortezadorry

Habits gradually weaken, spoil or fortify and strengthen us thus it’s very important which habits we choose to have

Well said Totally agreed

@mortezadorry

I always brush my teeth and use florid solutions to protect them because I don’t want to suffer in a dentist clinic.

Good for you! I really mean it. I could never make my peace with fluoride

@mortezadorry

imagine how much it can pull me back in my life

It’s the worst
Been there…

Thank you so much for participating Glad to have you back