تمرین رایتینگ - پزشکی

Hi
I think with hippocratic oath doctors undertake to do their best to save peoples life. In my opinion this is a good way to remember to be committed in work and it should expand in all jobs.
I have a really sad memory that when I was in the hospital, a really young child died and doctor couldn’t save him/her. So the doctor canceled all of him visits and went out.
I think the worst acpects of being a doctor are that you should work hard and you don’t have a lot of time for your self. Specially in your youge years. And you might see sickness and sadness and suffer and death a lot
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