تمرین رایتینگ - انگیزه

[Y_zarei]

Hi there

My best friend in these days

[matinrohany]

Hello,
Welcome to the challenge

@reza793

The purpose of the student education system is to cultivate the inner instincts of each person in addition to education in various fields. The cultivation of instincts motivates

Sure, that’s the purpose
But unfortunately, it didn’t work that way for me

@reza793

When we are motivated to do something, we do our best to have the best resources to learn. This is when learning becomes easy

Totally agreed

@reza793

When I fail, I do not try to return

Sometimes, it wouldn’t be the worst thing to try one more time

Thank you so much for participating

[matinrohany]

Hello,

@ShaghayeghAlavi

When I was at school, I can’t say I was motivated, or that the educational system did anything to help me discover my talents or weaknesses per se. They just try to motivate students with giving them scores and making them compete, but I think it takes a lot more than that to motivate someone.

Exactly! I wasn’t motivated at all
It was totally boring and frustrating at times.

@ShaghayeghAlavi

Competition can have a positive effect on learning when it’s done right. When everybody can feel included and that they are using their potentials. And that the effort is appreciated as much as the results.

@ShaghayeghAlavi

especially for my students

They’re really lucky to have you
All I do in my classes to motivate my students is to say, “Don’t worry, just talk.”

@ShaghayeghAlavi

what a long way they have come so far, instead of how much is still left to go.

That’s actually really motivating

Thanks a lot for participating
I really enjoyed reading your views on the matter.

[matinrohany]

Hello, Gisoo

@gisoo13

I actually feel the opposite of motivated. I hate school. I think, if we could spend 12 years’ worth of time and effort on what we love and are talented at, we all would feel much more fulfilled and happier

Couldn’t agree more
So much to give and so little to get in return.

@gisoo13

Instead, we clutter our minds with things which give us headaches at best, and lose our courage to go for what we love and know will make us happier, by and by. Some of us seem to even forget what they really want in their struggle to be what others want them to be.

That’s exactly what’s happening, and it’s really sad how THIS has been normalized!

@gisoo13

or is, indeed, our own affirmation enough

That’s enough for sure

@gisoo13

I believe, if we could only get one human-free day in our life, finding our real place in this world would be much easier

I agree

@gisoo13

I think, education without taking any account of the clay you have at hand, is pure stupidity.

Well said

@gisoo13

I think, at times, that’s all a fellow needs to hear.

That would work.
That’s why we got Spiderman.

Thanks a lot, for participating
Enjoyed your views on the matter

[ShaghayeghAlavi]

@matinrohany

Exactly! I wasn’t motivated at all
It was totally boring and frustrating at times.

So true! such a waste though. So many talents cannot find their true way.

@matinrohany

They’re really lucky to have you
All I do in my classes to motivate my students is to say, “Don’t worry, just talk.”

That’s kind of you to say, I like your way as well, minimalistic and effective. I learned that from you and will apply it

Thank you and I enjoyed our conversation as always

[gisoo13]

@matinrohany

That’s why we got Spiderman.

I’m serious.
I like the words he uses, mean, try…

If sth gives you some sort of purpose, just try to do it. You don’t have to be great, or make some money out of it so it would be “worthy” of your time. That it makes you happy, is reason enough. If you could manage to work sth great out of it, it’s awesome. But if you couldn’t, that’s ok. That feeling, is payment enough. You’ve at least tried. And god knows how many “idiots” cross our path EVERY DAY.

@matinrohany

Thanks a lot, for participating

My pleasure.(◕ᴗ◕✿)

[matinrohany]

Hello, dear Fatemeh
Sorry I’m late

@Fatemeh_Poodineh

I remember when I was in school we had competition between my friends. There were four of us and we all tried to be in top 3 of our classroom. That was my motivation for studying

That DID work out pretty well for you.
That’s a rare case.

@Fatemeh_Poodineh

But learning is always good and we must learn new things everyday. it will improve our character and as a result a better world.
Learning has no end until the day of death

Sure, totally agreed.
Even “not staying still” is a goal itself

@Fatemeh_Poodineh

Yeah, a few days ago I convinced my brother to by stickers for his laptop. It’s not that big of a deal but still it counts as motivation, right?

I guess so
Who knows? Maybe that’ll change his life.

@Fatemeh_Poodineh

But eventually I get back on my feet and start doing another thing that can help me reach my goal.

That’s all that’s important.
We’re gonna fail no matter what. What we need to remember is to get back on track as soon as we could.

Thank you so much for participating
Enjoyed reading your essay

[matinrohany]

Hello, dear Morteza
Sorry I’m late

@mortezadorry

Thanks heaps for your attention. Please give me feedback

My pleasure
Sure

@mortezadorry

isn’t

wasn’t*

@mortezadorry

educational

the* educational

@mortezadorry

or

I think “and” would be better

@mortezadorry

produces pressure and stressful

causes* stress and pressure

@mortezadorry

incentive

an incentive

@mortezadorry

because motivation increases engagement and when you are fully engaged in any occupation or profession down on the road you will become successful

Agreed

@mortezadorry

because it produces pressure and stressful then it makes a poisonous environment

For some people, it’s exactly just like that

@mortezadorry

I seldom try to motivate my friends and I talk about pains and pleasures which is going to be produced by doing a specific action therefore by considering affliction or blessing caused by doing that thing he or she will have incentive

That’s actually better, I think.
It’s totally helpful.

Thank you so much for participating
Enjoyed your views on the matter

[matinrohany]

Hello, Razie
Sorry I’m late

@razieamiri

About 200 words.
Do you mean each question’s answer should be lower than 200 or the whole answer??
I can not say whatever I want only in 200 words.

Don’t worry
Forget about the 200-word limit.
Just feel free from now on.

@razieamiri

I’ll appreciate it if you correct my mistakes.

Sure

@razieamiri

It’s necessary to have a reason when you’re doing something

Of course

@razieamiri

because you have to do it.

It’s not incorrect, but it’s also possible to say “because you have to.”

@razieamiri

to study and educate

for studying and education
(have the passion for sth)

@razieamiri

I easily can

I can easily*
(adverb goes after the auxiliary or modal auxiliary verbs)

@razieamiri

I usually have the passion to study and educate but when I lose it, I write my feelings and I try to answer them with something positive. I mean, I usually have a conversation with myself.

Oh, that’s actually interesting.
Does that work for you? I mean, does it help you stay motivated?

Thank you so much for participating
Enjoyed your views on the matter

[matinrohany]

Hello, dear Saeed
Welcome back
And, sorry I’m late

@Saeed-bavar1

Correct
my mistakes pls

Sure I’ll try

@Saeed-bavar1

For example, I enjoy studying English every day as if I’m hanging out with Nataly Portman

That’s intense.

@Saeed-bavar1

I practice and study about music as though it’s sleeping drunk in a warm cottage on a cold winter night

And that’s beautiful

@Saeed-bavar1

Therefore, I believe real motivations come from our deepest interests.

Well said
Totally agreed

The only thing I could find was this

@Saeed-bavar1

study about music

study music

That’s all
Thank you so much for participating
Enjoyed reading your essay

[matinrohany]

Hello, dear Yeganeh
Sorry I’m late.

0:09 Oh, really sorry to hear that.
Are you feeling better now?

0:50 That’s a great place to study I guess

1:11 I’d be shouting, too.

1:20 The important thing is that you enjoyed it as well as the others.

1:44 I don’t recommend Dariush, then

Thank you so much for participating
Really enjoyed listening to you

[matinrohany]

@ShaghayeghAlavi

So many talents cannot find their true way.

Exactly.
If only someone had helped me identify my real talent, I would’ve gone for the practice of law

@ShaghayeghAlavi

That’s kind of you to say, I like your way as well, minimalistic and effective. I learned that from you and will apply it

That’s so nice of you

[matinrohany]

@gisoo13

I’m serious.

No, I wasn’t being sarcastic.
I’m serious. You know the story.

@gisoo13

If sth gives you some sort of purpose, just try to do it. You don’t have to be great, or make some money out of it so it would be “worthy” of your time. That it makes you happy, is reason enough.

Exactly That’s enough

@gisoo13

That feeling, is payment enough.

Couldn’t agree more.

@gisoo13

And god knows how many “idiots” cross our path EVERY DAY.

Beyond counting (I mean it literally)

[ShaghayeghAlavi]

@matinrohany

Exactly.
If only someone had helped me identify my real talent, I would’ve gone for the practice of law

That’s so interesting to hear. Because after all these years I have came to the same conclusion. Law, or Arts and Design

[Y_zarei]

@matinrohany

Hello, dear Yeganeh

Hi

@matinrohany

Sorry, I’m late.

Oh, It doesn’t matter

@matinrohany

Oh, really sorry to hear that.
Are you feeling better now?

Yeah, I’ve been better now , thanks for asking

@matinrohany

I’d be shouting, too.

Oh, come on. We were just playing
Although If I were her I would…

@matinrohany

I don’t recommend Dariush, then

Dariush? I didn’t understand what do you mean by that

@matinrohany

Thank you so much for participating

My pleasure

[matinrohany]

Wow!
It’s actually my only regret. I don’t consider myself as an unlucky person but a little more luck there would’ve been nice

[matinrohany]

@Y_zarei

Although If I were her I would…

Exactly.
When you’re a teacher, it’s a whole different thing.

@Y_zarei

Dariush

داریوش (اقبالی)
گفتم پیشنهاد نمی‌دم بخاطر اینکه آهنگ‌هاشون دپرس‌کننده‌ست و کشنده‌ی انگیزه (البته من عاشقشونم)

[Y_zarei]

@matinrohany

Exactly.
When you’re a teacher, it’s a whole different thing

Okay okay, I admit it wasn’t a good thing

@matinrohany

داریوش (اقبالی)
گفتم پیشنهاد نمی‌دم بخاطر اینکه آهنگ‌هاشون دپرس‌کننده‌ست و کشنده‌ی انگیزه (البته من عاشقشونم)

خیلی جالبه ولی همین که گفتین کنجکاو شدم برم گوش بدم
آخه من همیشه با آهنگ های دپرس کننده انرژی می گیرم
البته نه خیلی زیاد که دیگه …
فقط بگم اگر خیلی گوش بدم باید تاپیک انگیزه ی ۲ بزنین

[gisoo13]

@matinrohany

No, I wasn’t being sarcastic.

Well, I thought you were being sarcastic. My bad.

[Saeed-bavar1]

You’re most welcome body
It’s always a pleasure participating in your challenges