گفتگوهای انگلیسی 📝 بچه های زبانشناس با هم

[elahehvelayati]

سلام بچه های پر تلاش و با انگیزه زبانشناس
حالتون چطوره؟
با تابستان و وقت های آزادتون برای بیشتر زبان خوندن، چه می کنید؟
یه مدتیه می بینم چالش های رایتینگ تالار تعطیل شده و چالش جدیدی توسط مربی و مجرب های عزیز، پیشنهاد نمی شه.
بد ندیدم که یه تاپیک برای تمرین های رایتینگ بچه های تالار ایجاد کنم. البته یه مقدار متفاوت تر از چالش های رایتینگ گذشته تو تالار‌.
به این صورت که تو این تاپیک، بچه ها با هم فقط به صورت انگلیسی، گفتگو و صحبت می کنند و کامنت فارسی، در کار نیست.
بچه های ماهر تر هم اگه توان بازخورد دادن به رایتینگ های بقیه بچه ها رو دارند، لطفاً و بی زحمت، دریغ نکنند. خودم هم سعی می کنم تا جایی که بتونم به بچه ها بازخورد بدم. هر چند که سوادم در این زمینه، خیلی قد نمی ده …
این تاپیک قراره پر از حس خوب باشه. یه جورهایی زنگ تفریح بچه ها باشه تا در مورد هر چیزی که دوست دارند به انگلیسی با هم صحبت کنند.
بچه ها، تو این تاپیک دست تنهام نزارید! مثل همیشه به کمکتون نیاز دارم.
این رو هم بگم من خودم، بشدت، رایتینگ ضعیف هستم و اشتباهات فاحشی توی رایتینگ هام دارم. پس در مورد رایتینگ های خودم هم اگه نظر و بازخوردی دارید، خیلی خوشحال می شم بهم بگید.
فقط یه نکته در پایان، خواهشاً هر کس که توانایی مشارکت در این تاپیک رو داره، این کار رو انجام بده.
اِن شاء الله من هم تو تاپیک هاتون جبران می کنم.
خوب، ببینم چه می کنید.

[alexander1]

Hello dear elahehedayati
I was waiting for such a topic, so i will be glad if communicate in the topic .
First of all I have a question fore you , and I want you to answer my question as much as you can.
1:were are you from
2:please introduce your self that may we can know you better, like were are you living and how old are you etc.
3.tell me about your opportunity for learning a second language, and how often you do that, what is the mysterious techniques you apply, and so forth.

Now I’m gonna introducing my self.
My name is alexander mohammad amir aghaei .
I born in Bulgaria that’s a country, then I came back iran living in Tehran, afterwards I came into the northern of the country .
You may call it shomal or mazandaran , I’m living now in mahmoodabad a city’s of mazandaran.
.I’m living here for about 13 to 14 years until now
It’s a beautiful place as you may know.
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Now about the reasoning for trying to accusing or educate the second language?!
First of all I love the English language skil . Because I can watching my favorite movies and TV shows that they are in English .
Next I wanna have to traveling to other countries like Britain were my aunt and cousin’ living. Or to America were my uncle living ther in Boston’s district of the United states.
Another point ofcourse to have an ability fore making money for my self like teaching or as a translator for a company, no different if it is related to government or not and independent.

My spacial techniques are for during this spacial time is more lessening and more reading , but by finding the most great topics like this I can practicing writing , or in other topics trying on my speaking.

Please correct my grammar and diction if there are some.

Please share me your ideas.

Censierly amir,

[niloo23]

hello my dear
I’m so excited, that able to participation this topic

[elahehvelayati]

@alexander1

so i will be glad if communicate in the topic .

And I’ll be so glad, if we can communicate together in this topic.

@alexander1

First of all

At first

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as much as you can.

As possible as you can

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your self

Yourself

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fore you

For you

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that may we can know you better,

So that we can to know you better

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like were are you living and how old are you etc.

Such as “Where are you living?” Or “How old are you?” and etc.

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tell me

Please explain me

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learning a second language

For learning second language

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what is the mysterious techniques you apply,

What’s your mysterious techniques that you use?

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and so forth.

And so on.

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and how often you do that,

How often do you that?

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your opportunity for learning

Your opportunities in learning

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Now I’m gonna introducing

Now I’m going to introduce

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alexander mohammad amir aghaei .

Alexander Mohammad Amir Aghaei

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I born

I was born

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that’s a country

Bulgaria is a country.

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then I came back iran

After a while, I came back to Iran

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living in Tehran,

And started living in Tehran

دوست عزیز یکم موارد زیاد هست. دوباره باید رو نوشته ات، کار کنم.

[elahehvelayati]

@niloo23

hello my dear

Hello my dear Niloo

@niloo23

I’m so excited, that able to participation this topic

It’s my pleasure. I’m so glad to hear that.

By the way, any news from you? How is your life nowadays? How is it going?
I missed you so much. In this topic, you can speak whatever you want.
Speak about yourself a bit.

[alexander1]

Thank you very much , as I noticed at the bottom of the page you told that we have writing in English.
Whereas please answer me in English.
You correct the grammar in my sentences, and I appreciate your teaching.
I have to read it more so I can learn much more form it.
One tip:
I usually write informal and as a native daily conversation.
Ofcourse it’s a weakness cause I dont know how exactly writing at a formal way.
I’m not advanced and even intermediate, I’m just a beginner . So please help me more to improve just like you are improved.
Thanks alot. Censierly amir,

[niloo23]

thanks my dear, me too
I’m teacher and researcher from laboratory in university. now i stay at home because Due to Corona, the university is currently closed

[alexander1]

Excuse me , would you mind to explain more about laboratory? And what do you exactly teaching, i mean what is the context or subjects?!

[niloo23]

Anytime
i teach laboratory course (microbiology, immunology, cell culture, mycology, etc) to bachelor and MSc students in university

[alexander1]

Dear nilloo:
Please introduce me some powerful sources about writing, it can be a book and that’s also great.
Thanks alot.

[elahehvelayati]

@alexander1

My spacial techniques are for during this spacial time is more lessening and more reading

My special techniques for this time are listening and reading more

@alexander1

but by finding the most great topics like this I can practicing writing

But I can practice in writing by finding the most great topics like this

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or in other topics trying on my speaking.

Or in other topics for trying in improving my speaking skill

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correct my grammar and diction if there are some.

Correct my grammars and dictations mistakes, if I have

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share me

Share with me

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.I’m living here for about 13 to 14 years until now

I’ve lived here since 13 or 14 years ago until now

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shomal or mazandaran

Shomal or Mazandsran

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I’m living now in mahmoodabad a city’s of mazandaran.

I’m living in Mahmoodabad city now. Mahmmodabad is one of the cities’ Mazandaran province.

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the northern of the country .

The north of the country

[alexander1]

Well you are a woman with lots of knowledge about biologicals and so erudite!
Do your job is hard or easy?!
Do you love it or not?!
And how much time do you spent on your second language learning?!

[alexander1]

You are correcting my mistakes and it causes the sentences sounds more articulate and eloquent
Thank you for your time and effort.

[niloo23]

Actually، i never to went language class, but I’m able to writing, because i written article and use zaban shenas

[alexander1]

But how about the times we are going to writing to our friend?!

[alexander1]

I know about that one , I meant how long you are using zabanshenas?!

[alexander1]

One more question?
Do you researching about Corona virus right know?

[elahehvelayati]

@alexander1

Another point ofcourse to have

Of course, another idea having

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fore making

For making

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my self

Myself

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, no different if

It doesn’t matter if

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and independent

And as a independent person.

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First of all I love the English language skil .

At first, I love English language skill.

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I can watching

I can watch

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I wanna have to traveling

I want to travel

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my aunt and cousin’ living

Where my aunt and cousin are living

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were my uncle living ther in Boston’s district of the United states.

Where my uncle is living in the United Statues whereabouts Boston.

@alexander1

Now about the reasoning for trying to accusing or educate the second language?!

Now what’s my reasons for trying in learning and educating second language like English?

[alexander1]

What’s your idea about this virus?!
Do the scientists can find a way like an antidote?!
Or that’s impossible?!

[elahehvelayati]

@alexander1

First of all I have a question fore you , and I want you to answer my question as much as you can.
1:were are you from
2:please introduce your self that may we

This is my full biography

چالش رایتینگ - می تونی صد تا چیز از خودت بنویسی؟

My first name is Elaheh. My last name is Velayati. I have no nickname. I have no middle name. I was born on December the 10th, 1986. I’m 33 years old. My mother tongue is Persian. I was born in Tehran city and I’ve lived in this city all my life. I live with my parents. I don’t like living in a single house. I was born six months age! My weight during birth was only 700 grams and my height was 35 centimeters! I have extreme eye problems since birth. My left eye is approximately blind! These my …