Hello there everyone! We all have been inspired by at least one person in our entire life. That person could be a friend, a family member, a famous person, or just a random guy. According to how close you are to that person, and according to your relationship, I want you to write a letter to that person, and say whatever you like.
Hello my dear master ( mullah ( you are the only one who encouraged me without you i could not get this position my only desire to get this things was your hope in me I don’t know where you are now or how you feel at the begging of our work when i felt hard you guided me. From a small student to my mullah
Hey bro , how’s it going ?
I really missed you , however your songs and your voice are with me every fu… day .
I’ve got something to do in music , no matter what’ll happen in the end ! you taught me that :
I tried so hard and got so far
But in the end it doesn’t even matter
I had to fall to lose it all
But in the end it doesn’t even matter
Lots of love to you Chester Bennington , I’m gonna meet you in darkness some day
Since I found u and ur page, my life have
changed a lot
I realized, it’s possible for me to be what I ever want
And after a while I got that every person in zaban shenas have same purpose as mine
So I start watching ur videos and I learn how to make video and teach people in social media
I sended my first video to be part of this wonderful team but that video was weak
For 2 month I have been working on my mistakes and I improved
I decide to start on my own page and effect the people around me
It always will be a pleasure to being part of zaban shenas but I find my path I will continue even alone
Thanx for all the advice and energy and time
I hope see u all as coworkers
Hi there! thanks for joining us
I’m about to give you a feedback on your letter
- Dear Master (Mullah)
You are the only one who encouraged me. without you I could not ever get this position. My only desire to get these things was my hope of you. I don’t know where you are now, or how you feel. At the beginning ( is that what you meant ?! ) of our work, it was hard for me but you guided me.
From/By a small student
(As you mentioned his name at the beginning of your letter, you don’t really need to mention him at the end again)
Thank you dear @Mahshid103
Hello there dear Saeed! well, it seems that you and Chester Bennington were close friends as you called him “bro”
By the way, let’s have a quick look on your letter.
You were damn close
May he rest in peace
Thank you at the begging (i mean from our works start ) but the last one was from me to you (from a small student to my teacher
Hey Kambiz @YoKambiz You’ve got a letter in my Writing challenge wanna take a look?
Umm! By the way, do you mind if I give you feedback on your text dear @Mahdi007AJ ?
Oh ok. So I will make changes in that message again. you will see the edited one in a minute
It’s honor to me if u write ur feedback
I’m man of speaking not writing
I will be happy If u ignore my mistakes
Thank you Alireza
Yeah we were good fellas
I’ve got a mini snooker club + coffee shop but It seems a Linkin Park fan club , Lp songs are always playing and …
! I bet if Chester was still alive , he would come to have a drink with us
Wish you the best brother.
I am writing about my self for the next 10 years
I am sure every thing is right there because I am trying for the best & except the worst, you are my inspiration, I do everything for you to have better & more confident life,I am at the beginning of my way to achieve you & I get closer to you step by step & I never give up
I recently joined in zabanshenas. I’m glad to be here with you.
This is the first challenge that I participate and hope I haven’t make too many mistakes.
Hi my parents
I’m glad to have you by my side. You always with your support and encouragement give me confidence and remind me I have many abilities. You always gave me energy in the worst situations.
I hope to reach a position that I can be useful for everyone and you be proud of me.
I love you very much.
Your daughter mohanna.
thanks for taking the time to read this text.
We’re happy to have you here.
Welcome to this writing challenge and thanks for participating.
I can give you feedback on your text if you don’t mind
Thanks for writing this text
sure, i’m happy.
I hope that I haven’t made too many mistakes.
You always give me confidence by your support and encouragement.
Thanks a lot.
Was the rest correct?