چالش داستان کوتاه - شماره اول

شما همینکه اینجا اعلام حضور میکنید بسیار ارزشمنده خانوم نیکنام. :rose: :rose: :rose:

دوستانی که نمیتونن شرکت کنن فقط حضورشون رو اعلام کنن باعث قوت قلبه.

همه شما عزیزید. هم دوستانی که شرکت میکنن هم اونایی که دوست دارن باشن ولی متاسفانه نمیشه.

اونایی هم که خنثی هستند مهم نیست واسشون بعد زنگ تفریح بیرون بمونن :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:

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دقیقاً … من هم داشتم به این فکر می کردم که اصلاً سیر داستانی چی باشه … هی موضوع عوض کردم .‌‌… چون خیلی باید طولانی می نوشتم.
تازه الان یکم به ثبات فکری رسیدم. … اون هم فقط یه سکانس داستانی می تونم بنویسم. ولی این یه سکانس رو می خوام مفصل بنویسم.
حالا من با داستان نویسی میونه ای ندارم و فکر نکنم استعدادی داشته باشم.
ولی وقتی زبانشناس، چالش مطرح می کنه، به صلاح خودمونه که روش کار کنیم و چالش رو جواب بدیم.

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:joy::joy::joy::joy::joy::grin::grin::grin::ok_hand::ok_hand::ok_hand:
به شما می گن لیدر درجه یک .‌…!

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:stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes: :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes: :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:

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:joy::joy::joy:

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ما باید بیرون بمونیم :joy::joy::joy:
من تمام تلاشمو میکنم که فردا بنویسمو بزارم :rofl::rofl::rofl: خدایا روسفیدم کن

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محدثه باور میکنی من نمیتونم سرمو هم بخارونم :grin::grin:منتظرم خونه تکونی تموم بشه انشالله برنامه های تالار رو پیاده کنم :sob::sweat_smile::sweat_smile::sweat_smile:

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اره واقعا میفهممت خداروشکر که هنوز خونه تکونی رو شروع نکردیم و میتونم به کارا برسم
اگه کمک میخوای بگو من این روزا به شدت بیکارم :star_struck::star_struck:
فقط مخم کپک زده انقد ازش استفاده نکردم :sweat_smile::sweat_smile:

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Lack of Money, having no job, and all the other things combined to get me into by far the biggest trouble .

In the blink of an eye, I was working with Jessy AKA Shadow, the most famous smuggler in the area. Yesterday we had to smuggle a dealer from Mexico to the US. He had 1 kg coke, and he wanted to sneak it in . He gave us a significant amount of money for this extra work. But, something was wrong, I could see it in Shadow’s eyes.

In the middle of the way, suddenly, Shadow pulled his gun out and pointed it at the dealer’s head and bannggg.

He just pulled the trigger, and the desert was full of dealer’s blood. I stopped dead. Shocked and nervous, looking around to figure out what just happened that suddenly something hard hit me over the head.

I woke up all tied up in a dark place alone . I was under the impression that Shadow wanted to smuggle him to the US. But now I have no clue what’s going on here and what’s going to happen to me…

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به این میگن داستان، براووو :clap::clap::clap:
داستانی که کشت و کشتار نداشته باشه اصن داستان نیس :laughing::ok_hand:

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مرسیی :rose::rose::rose::rose:

:grimacing::joy::grin:

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سلام
گویا امکان ادیت در پست قبل از بین رفته دوباره داستان رو اینجا میارم

I want to introduce a kind of creatures who are very smart at sneaking things and smuggling, especially new generation of these creatures. They are also known as Dragon generation. If you see them quite maybe you judge them mellow, but you are under the impression. Their calmness means they have plot. Their eyes can speak with you. Yes, I speak about kids. One day my daughter, Ala, wanted to go to the kindergarten and asked me give her toys. Since they are not allowed to take toy to kindergarten but on thursdays, I did not let her then she told " Mom I can hide it easily". As I’m a Mom who takes advantage of any time for advice and can be long-winded, I told her " Mom, do you think thief is only a person who comes other’s house without permission or smuggling refers to the illegal transfer of material ( or person) from one place to other place. No my dear, in today’s time and age smuggling is you hide your chocolate inside your clothes be for entering the classroom to save yourself from getting in trouble".

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This is a short memory

I did military service when i was 25.I am a mobile addict and decideda to don’t leave my mobile at all.By accident,I got a job in the security department,they did n’t search me cause some reasons.
In that period,I didn’t get into trouble although smuggled my mobile every day.
I was under the impression that I 'm a unlucky man.

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1-I get into trouble
2-Why?
1-You were smartest student by far!
2- He was Danny Miller, i’m
junior…gosh… people won’t forget him :triumph:
1-I smuggled salt into sugarland
2-I’m under the impression that you have sneak salt to sugarland.
1-You know Pablo Escobar
2-Yeah, AKA “The Godfather”
1-I’ll be as rich as him by the end of the year.
2- Yes, and pigs might fly!
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Pablo Escobar
“The King of Cocaine,” Escobar is the wealthiest criminal in history, having amassed an estimated net worth of US$30 billion by the time of his death—equivalent to $59 billion as of 2019
Pablo_Escobar_Mug

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