Write a letter to a person who has inspired you - چالش رایتینگ

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How was my writing? Plz tell me

Dear Mr. Almassi;
I hope this letter finds you well! I Hope you are doing okay. I just wanted to tell you how I appreciate you and the things you did for us. I still remember the time you told us that almost nothing is hard! Some things just take more time and trouble to be done.
This sentence really helped me at my hard times, at times that I was in a bad mood, at times that I had this thought in my mind that I am not good enough to solve my life challenges… . Recalling it helped me to do the best work I could do. You’ve been my best male teacher in my entire life.
Love always, F. H

Hi there! I’m really sorry. I missed your message I think. my bad!

I am writing about myself in 10 years later

Everything

I didn’t quite get that! can you tell me what you meant in Persian? so I can give you a better feedback… by the way this could be an alternative for what you said:
I am trying for the bests and I’m avoiding bad things.

to have a better and

to become you
(As you are talking to yourself in the future, so you don’t achieve yourself. you become your future self)

And

Thank you for joining us

Hello there dear Ms Velayati!

for some reasons ( I know, that was just a typo )

the word “work” is uncountable so it’s incorrect to say “works”. instead, we can say:
experiences
cases
products
books

I don’t want to be one of them

umm
Thanks for joining us. I appreciate your participation
Well, This is not a really detailed feedback on your essay, I will give you a more detailed feedback later

Hello there dear Hana! and thanks for joining us in this topic

I’m so happy that I joined this challenge

I’m sorry can you tell me about what you meant here in Persian? cuz I didn’t quite catch that

I decided to be a physicist

I was inspired by Professor Samiee
OR
Prof. Samiee inspired me

I joined Zabanshenas

Your great team and this application inspires me
OR
Your great team and this application inspired me

Thanks for participating.

Hello to you all! as I see in here, there are some of you dear friends who haven’t actually written “A Letter To” a person who has inspired them and they’ve just written something to me and surprisingly I don’t think I have inspired anyone in my life

So I would like you dear friends to pay attention to what actually the challenge asks you to do. if this was an IELTS writing test, some of your essays WOULD NOT be even checked .

Perfect!
That was a real letter to someone who has inspired you

Therefore, let me find out then by myself (on my own) and I’m going to fix them, later, maybe someday! To all intents and purposes, these writing challenges of yours, seem to me, as if they are the writing tasks in the IELTS test!

Incidentally, I googled it (what is the correct way to write …) on the Internet, before writing this comment of mine on this topic of yours. That’s what had happened to some of the feedbacks which you’ve given me on previous writings of mine. But anyway, it doesn’t matter to me. However, some mistakes have been made or created by accident and as unintended.
Like this one!

Dear Mr Shakouri;

I should confess here that your mastery of speech has been always inspiring me!

Actually I happend to watch some parts of your speech 2 or 3 years ago, and since then My opinion on reading books has compeletly changed.

Some times I happen to watch some of your clips on instagrams and It pushes me to grab a book and start to read it.

I think the way you read different books in different topics has made you an stunning orator even if you don’t aim it.

I can truly say: You are the wind beneath my wings!

Sincerely

Hellow
First of all thanks for good challenge, l’ve join zaban shenas yet and very intrested on it.
Untill now I’ve got large amounts of inspiration people within famous and successful persons, friends or even strangers!
You know,some times you met a human that attracted you with first wourd or maybe first look. For example I remember a girl named leili and her special personality effects on me even I never met her again.
Another inspiration person in my life is misses Hariri, an adult archive. Actually I’m architecture students and recognize her in that way.
She is strong woman with balanced success in her life,besides her ausem artworks she seems very happy and generous human. On her postes and her speeches we can see the symbols of good relationships between her family and she.
Another reason that I like her is her supports of young hard work and creative ladies.
Thanks for reading this writed and again thank you for good challenge

Oh sorry, actually I didn’t write this one completely🤦‍♀️
The sentence was:maybe you think it’s wired
Thanks for taking the time and your attention.

Hello there dear Setare! And thanks for participating.

You had a very nice start in writing a letter.
The point that attracted me, was that you didn’t use ( . ) after writing “Mr”.
Well that’s completely correct if your target dialect is British English and if your target dialect is American English, you should write it like “Mr. Shakouri”
So totally
Mr Shakouri
Mr. Shakouri

Sometimes

You can also say “start to read” and I reckon this one is grammatically a better choice

A stunning orator

Thank you very much

Hello there dear Dorsa and welcome to the community

Well, first of all, I’d like to show you this message of mine.

And then, let’s have a feedback on your essay if you don’t mind

I always use this combination in this form, without paying any attention to this dot! Actually I didn’t know using or not using a dot makes difference.
Good to know
Thank you for reading our writing meticulously.

I was wondering to write it or not, now I know it well. thank you to mention it.

Thanks. I don’t understand how and where can I see your feedback please lead me more

Hi everyone
Umm , Can I write?!

I don’t know if I can or not
Because it’s been so long …
I didn’t do anything in a long time at Zababshenas
Isn’t the time of this challenge over?

Isn’t the time of ME over?!

Thanks a million

hello steve this is yekta
i’m an iranian girl . from that day that i saw your speech something changed in my heart and my mind.since that day i have tried as hell almost every day and the most important part of that is i have passion about what i’m doing. you saved me from a lot of problems . i remember that before seeing your speech i asked from god to send me a miracle ,man you were that miracle thank you for every thing.i swear i will be famous and one of the most succesfull people in the world ,one day you will come for my speech and i will thank you face to face

You’re welcome

Here. In this topic. I’m just about to give you feedback on yiur text. I was just asking for permission

You’re welcome my friend

Hey there! Welcome back!
Yes why not? Go ahead my friend

Hello there dear Ms Soltani
Thanks for joining us

Well totally your essay was fine and you had almost no grammatical or spelling mistakes. But I’d like to tell you that you need to work on writing capital letters more amd you should pay attention to the times that you should use capital letters.

For example:

• the word “I” is always capitalized and “i” is wrong.
• at the beginning of any sentence you should use capital letters.
  Like: Hello there. This book is so good. Do you have more books?
• When you want to write a special name, like God, Alireza, Yekta, Iran, Italy, etc.
• also nationalities and languages, names of the cities and provinces. Or states
  And so on…

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